Writing

Writing



During term 1 and 2 we have been working on narratives and letter writing. I was in Mr. Grahams group because I was confident that I didn’t need much help but just a little bit. I have been confident with my writing lately and I feel I have improved with my writing this year. And I have been really with my hand writing lately I feel that I have improved and that my writing is getting allot netter this year. I was really happy with my portal story I felt it was one of my best stories I have ever written. I was really happy with my editing with my portal story. My least favourite story was my Andy Griffith's story I feel it was not one of my best story but I tried to make it as interesting as possible. I was happy with my army letter it was the first real letter I have written I felt comfortable when writing my. I have been happy with my spelling lately I feel I have been going well with my spelling. Overall I have been happy with my letter writing and my stories. I feel I have improved with my editing skills. And I have recently been stepping up with my planning skills. I really like Miss S idea of the planning card I am really noticing that it has been helping me with my writing. My goal for this year is to improve on getting that extra bit of the plan like the extra bits of flesh for the plan because that extra bit of flesh for the plan can make you write a wicked story. the plan layoutIntro : 1. Characters 2. start of the story 3. start of the problem Middle : 1. Get into problem 2. Get really stuck into a problem 3. Get out of problem Conclusion: 1. Get home safe 2. have a party or celebration Here is my portal story Here is my Andy Griffith's story Here is my Army Letter

Here is my Red Rock Deli Chips letter

After we had watched the movie Galipoli we went back and we had to pick a scene out of th e movie and then go draw it in our sketch book. I chose the part right at the end were Archie says to himself what hes trainer like a saying he said that and then jump over the wall and then ran hes legs of he nearly got there and then he got shot. Here is the picture i drew with some war background.

Here is my Galipoli movie picture